I recently saw this elevation online and I couldn't resist spending a few minutes marking up some of its short comings from a design perspective as I keep on seeing similar elevations being sold to owners.
Remember, good composition does not necessarily mean breaking the bank.
If you have any questions about how a design you are thinking about purchasing from a catalog, and especially a design you are thinking of building from scratch, can be made better, please reach out to me for a consultation.
I assure you, there will always be a way to make it better.
All markups done in Bluebeam Revu. Highly encourage you to use this software for all of your PDF needs.